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If You Don’t Mind

If You Don’t Mind

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If You Don’t Mind

By: Azza El Wakeel

Walk away from my life

Stay away from my sight

‘Cause when I last saw you

I stayed awake all night

Remembering the sand castles

We built together

The sky we touched

The stars we caught

Recalling the promises we made

To be faithful to one another

For our love to live forever

All the feelings I was able to hide

I was able to burry deep in my heart

Awakened in me again, tortured my mind

You betrayed me and killed me once

And once is enough

So if you don’t mind

Stay away from my path

Hide from my life

Allow me to forget you

Allow me to enjoy my life

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Azza El Wakeel

15 responses to “If You Don’t Mind”

  1. Mindful Mystic (MM) Avatar
    Mindful Mystic (MM)

    Very moving and meaningful. It hurts so much to be reminded of love lost. 🙏

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      Azza El Wakeel

      Thank you so much for your valuable comment.

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  2. Chuckster Avatar
    Chuckster

    Some loves don’t fade—they burn silently in the background, like a candle you thought you’d blown out. 🪔

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      So true Ustaz Chuckster!.🕯
      It’s been a few months now that you hadn’t added new posts to your blog, I miss reading your stories!. 📖🖋

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  3. K. Ravindre Avatar
    K. Ravindre

    Ah! there is reality in your poem with examples nature beauty

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      Thank you so much, I truly appreciate your comment.

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  4. pk world 🌎 Avatar
    pk world 🌎

    Nice post 💜❤️💗

    Grettings regards 🌞 God bless you ⭐

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      Thanks for your nice comment. Greetings regards and God’s blessings to you too.

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  5. K. Ravindre Avatar
    K. Ravindre

    This poem beautifully captures the pain of lost love and the struggle to move forward after betrayal. The imagery of sand castles, stars, and promises brings the memories to life, while the plea for distance is both powerful and vulnerable. Your words express the pain of holding on and the courage it takes to finally let go. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt emotions through your poetry

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      Thank you for your nice and valuable comment, I truly appreciate it!.

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  6. pk world 🌎 Avatar
    pk world 🌎

    💚💜💗
    Happy Sunday 🌅
    Good bless you 🌹

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  7. pk 🌍 Educación y más. Avatar
    pk 🌍 Educación y más.

    Excellent post 💯🧡❤️💝
    Good afternoon ☀️ 🌎 🇪🇦
    Good bless you 🏵️

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      I truly appreciate your nice comment!.
      Good afternoon and God bless you too.
      Best regards and wishes.

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  8. Krishna Shiwarkar Avatar
    Krishna Shiwarkar

    Such raw, heartfelt emotion! 💔 Your words echo the pain of betrayal and the strength it takes to reclaim peace. The imagery of sandcastles and stars makes the heartbreak even more poignant—memories once magical, now haunting. Yet through the sorrow, there’s power in choosing healing. 🌅🕊️ Your voice is strong. Keep writing. Let poetry be your freedom.❤️🌹👏

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    1. Azza El Wakeel Avatar
      Azza El Wakeel

      Heartfelt thanks for your heartwarming short review on my poem “If You Don’t Mind”. I truly appreciate your visit to my blog and value all the nice comments you added!.

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